Independent Studio- 3

This Tuesday, a representative from Lesley University came to our school. He offered me a portfolio review, to which I gladly accepted. He gave me lots of appreciated constructive criticism on my pieces, focusing on what I could do to improve them. He expressed his admiration for a certain piece, but told me that he felt there could be "more" to the scene. I completely agreed, as I had rushed the background for the sake of time.
Today in Independent Studio, I took to improving the piece and started on the first step towards creating a more interesting image. This class period, I painted another face behind the original one, in a more painterly style as opposed to the rigid and stylized structure of the first one as well as blending the background. I plan to continue on this piece by adding either more faces or a landscape behind the two faces already there. 

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